写作 | 英语写作高分范文60篇：42 - 网上购物（附音频可背诵）
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写作题目：网上购物With the increasing use of the Internet more and more students are using their computers to buy things like books, cosmetics and mobile phones. Some people say that shopping online is best while others prefer shopping in stores, Which do you prefer?
In recent years, online shopping has become increasingly popular in China. The last decade witnessed a dramatic increase in the number of people opting for online shopping. Some people claim that online shopping can completely replace shopping in retail stores, Given the security and product quality concerns of online shopping, however,l am against shopping online.
Firstly, shopping online has proved to be not safe enough. Consumers who buy products online need to provide their private information, such as ID number, personal and credit card details which can be stolen and used fraudulently by skillful crackers and hackers. Furthermore, e-commerce using check and credit cards leaves the clients vulnerable to banking fraud which remains the top security concerns for people when it comes to online shopping. Secondly, the quality of the products bought online cannot be guaranteed. Some functional products such as apparel and electronic devices cannot be tried or tested online. Unlike traditional retail stores, online shops cannot provide you with the chance to check the product's quality before buying them. Online shoppers are worried that the products will not be what they have expected when viewing web pages.
It is true that online shopping offers an attractive list of benefits, with the most obvious being the convenience it brings to the shoppers. Nevertheless, due to its security and product quality concerns, I personally hold that online shopping is far from being a good choice for shoppers. (238 words)
1.Some drawbacks of shopping online are the lack of security and the problem for compulsive shoppers.
网上购物的一些不足之处是缺乏安全性以及购物狂的问题。
2.You do not know if you can t:rust the website you use and even if it is trustworthy, hackers may still steal your credit card information.
你不知道你能不能信任你所用的网站。即使这个网站是可靠的，黑客仍会盗取你的信用卡信息。
3.Since the online stores are open 24/7, you can always buy new goods, which is especially harmful for people who lack discipline or who are compulsive shoppers.
因为网上商店是每天全天候营业的，你总是可以买到新的商品，这对于那些缺乏自制力的人和购物狂尤其有害。
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